The language of Brutus and Antony |
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Brutus |
Antony |
1. Brutus speaks in prose. |
1 Antony, as if aware of the greater effect of rhythm and poetry on people, speaks in verse. |
2. Brutus, the theoretical philosopher, uses abstract words like "respect, honour, wisdom", as well as abstract concepts like "slavery" and "freedom". | 2. Antony, the wily politician, speaks of concrete things, and shows the horrified people the massacred body of Caesar. |
3. Brutus starts his speech appealing first to the "Romans" and then to his "countrymen and lovers", which leaves a gap between him and his audience. | 3. Antony inverts the word order, and his opening sentence "Friends, Romans, countrymen" makes the people feel he is one of them. |
4. Brutus, throughout his speach, insists on me and I. (Hear me, my cause, my honour, I weep, I rejoice). | 4. Antony disregards himself and pretends he is a poor orator; he hammers his audience with a lot of you's, thus personally involving them in the murder and its consequences. |
5. Brutus, the idealist, puts the ignorant mob on his own level, and invites them to a discussion (If any, speak, for him have I offended). |
5. Antony, the shrewd diplomat, humbly asks for the mob's permission before acting. |
6. Brutus remembers the military qualities of Caesar (fortune, valour, ambition). | 6. Antony presents a more domestic side of Ceasar's Character: He was a just, faithful friend, brought money to Rome, cried with the poor, refused the crown) |
7.Brutus speaks to the mind of the people and presents death as a syllogism; not that he loved Caesar less, but loved Rome more | 7. Antony speaks to their souls and feelings, and describes death in all its physical horror, wounds, and blood. |
8. The noble Brutus, seeing Caesar's death as a moral problem, is ready to kill himself for the good of his counrty (I have the same dagger) | 8. Antony, far from being willing to die, realizes the political meaning of the murder, and bravely defends Caesar in front of a hostile crowd, with courage and shrewdness, using the only weapon he has, language. He makes the best of it by exploiting devices such as metaphors, allitteration, irony, and contrasts. |
The mob As to the mob, in very few lines, Shakespeare presents an intelligent analysis of their changeableness. Their broken language, based on stychomythia, reveals confusion and contradiction: after applauding Brutus for killing Cesar, they want another Caesar in Brutus. In their sheep-like anonimity, they are easily manipulated by the eloquence of Antony who, like a skillful puppeteer, in the end turns them against the very people they had come to extol. |
Cfr. Marinoni Mingazzini, Salmoiraghi, A Mirror of the Times, Napoli, Morano ed., 1989, pp.169-170